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 * Is Bob evil**


 * Once there was a town named denavill **


 * They went to try the magic maker to see if it was working or not ,it wasn’t but no one knew why so they got some people to check the thing and after they had done they went and told __fred__ and __steve__ that the only thing missing was the power source but were sure they had put it in they made sure of it.They ask the people to prove it so they did they led them to the place the power source had been but it was gone and they had no idea who had taken and where they are taken it but what they did know was they were going to find out. They went around the whole town and they ask everyone if they had seen anything or anyone and then a man with dark ginger hair and a old t-shirt named __bob steve dad__ says “I saw someone in a hood sneaking around town and left through the back gate heading to the forest“ thank you side __steve__ and they left into the forest. **


 * After a looking through the forest for a long time they came across a house so they went inside and a old man making wooden toys but he was still a person and any one could of done so they still looked around his house but they didn’t find anything so they keeped look around the forest but they didn’t find any more house so they went back into the town and went to see __bob__ to see if he saw what he looked like he had black hair and was quite boney and I already told you that he left though the back gate then they ask “have you seen him anywhere before” and then a little girl side “I think I’ve seen him walking around town before he looked quite mid age and quite small” thank you says fred so steve fred and bob went around town looking for someone mid age and small and when they found some they’ll look in their house but every house they looked in only had normal power source like batteries so they went back to __bob__ to see if he had any more information but he didn’t so they went to were to big batteries should be so they could see if there was any clues and then they saw a big lot of ginger hair so they knew it was ginger bob, “How could you dad” says Steve My dad would never do something like that so they we to prove his innocence but they couldn’t so bob had to go to jail unless steve could find something in The Big Book of Laws so Steve got busy while bob had to go to court so they could find out why he did it that’s when he **


 * My Adventure in Bonavia **


 * I didn’t know where to go, it had been following for ages, I couldn’t outrun the big animal, everywhere I went it followed me and soon I was going to be the lunch of an unknown monster. The only way to get away from it was to get somewhere it couldn't get to, like up a tree or something. Then I saw a river running alongside a cliff in front of me; so I was hoping this thing couldn't swim; it was my only hope. I quickly dived from the riverbank into the water and then looked behind me to see if it had followed me. Then I finally got a good look at the monster, it was big and hairy with four legs and two arms, thankfully it couldn’t swim and I was safe for now. **


 * I was wondering what I should do and then I saw a big swarm of small blue hairy crocodiles swimming towards me. I didn’t know what to do, if I went to land I would get eaten if I stayed in the water I would get eaten so I did the only thing I could do. I stayed in the water and swam down the river. I tried to out swim the things but they kept on getting closer. Then I saw a cave up ahead but there was no point, they would get to me before I could get to the cave but I still tried but they were too close. I dove under the water and waited, holding my breath, until they went past. They passed me and passed the entrance to the cave, by this time I was less than a meter from the cave, could I get to it without them turning around and seeing me. Then the tide suddenly changed direction and began pushing harder and harder against my body, pushing me away from the cave mouth. The hairy crocodiles changed direction as well and started heading back towards me. I swam as hard as I could towards the cave but I was still getting pushed back. **


 * I decided to try and climb a little bit up the cliff and moved towards the cave but unexpectedly there was a landslide coming for the top of the cliff. Luckily I was a good climber and I managed to quickly get to the cave and dive into it. I tried to catch my breath, wondering what I should do next. Then I saw a dog shaped shadow in the corner of my eye, climbing into the cave. I didn’t care if it was a dog or not, anything around here must be bad so I ran as far as I could into the cave. When I was deep in the cave, I got the feeling that something didn’t want me in there. **


 * Then I realised I was lost so I tried to retrace my steps but I couldn’t, there were too many tunnels. Then I heard something so I turned around but I couldn’t see anything. I kept on walking and then I heard it again and this time I was sure I heard something. Then I heard two people whispering “move over he might see me” “ no you move over and be quiet” so I went and looked behind a rock and there was two pointy shoed elves staring at me. “Have you been following me” I said. “No no, we’ve just been walking behind you and hiding when you turn around”. **
 * ** “That” I said “is following”.  ** **


 * “Who are you to judge,they said, “at least we know our way back and we’re not telling you.” I offered them all the money I had in my pocket, which was only $20, but they didn’t know what money was so they declined my offer. I asked “where do you guys come from?” They immediately replied “Santa's workshop” but for some reason they said it grumpily so I amasedly said “you guys live at the north pole” ? I suddenly realised that there’s more than one santa when they said “no you're thinking of the wrong santa that’s the good santa we work for the bad santa, you know, the one who took over Bonavia and forced Lord Jaken out of town”. Then I ask them “do you know the way to London” but they didn’t, they said “there is only one person who knows all the ways around this cave, they call him ‘The Cave Wanderer’. I still wanted to get out of this cave and I didn’t care where I ended up but they still would not tell me no matter what I offered them. Then I said “what’s stopping me from following you like you did to me”. At that point they started to run away so I sprinted after them. **


 * After running after the elves I soon caught up with them because their legs were pretty small and they couldn’t run very fast and I was one of the fastest runners in my class. They had no chance! We were running for about 15 minutes, I was finding it hard to keep behind them because if I ran I went in front of them and when I walk I would get too far behind them but then we finally got out of the cave and entered a forest. **


 * After walking through the forest for a bit I saw a damp track through the middle of the forest but for some reason the elves didn’t go on the track. When I asked them why, because by this time they had realised I was following them, and we’d started walking, the small elf said “because the bad santa is that way and the other way was where Lord Jaken and the villagers went but santa doesn’t know that yet”. **
 * ** “Don’t tell him that” said the other elf to his friend, but it was already too late, I had started running down the track looking for The Cave Wanderer and and a way to get home.  ** **


 * I was so excited and had so much energy that I didn’t think what would happen if the track splits in two; sure enough it did! Both tracks weren’t as big as the main one but they were both the same. I was about to start crying when I heard a husky voice come from behind a tree, then an old three legged thing sitting there saying in “you’re a little late, everyone's gone”. I replied “I’m just trying to get back home, by any chance are you The Cave Wanderer” I knew it was a long shot but it was worth a try. Then he replied “no sir, I’m Jaken, Lord Jaken, I was once the leader of all of Bonavia but now I’m nothing”. I was amased that I was meeting Lord Jaken even though I’ve only just heard of him it was still great but I still didn’t know why he was alone so I asked him and he said “I didn’t know what way to go and whatever way I suggested the villagers would push me over and head off in two directions”. I helped the man up and asked him if he knew The Cave Wanderer and he did, in fact they were very good friends but he didn’t know what way he had gone.I turned around, annoyed then I saw something on the ground, footsteps, lots of footsteps. I ran back to Jaken and quickly asked him “do you know what type of shoes The Cave Wanderer was wearing” then I realised what kind of person knows what shoes a person’s wearing but it turned out Jaken was the one who given him his shoes. **


 * We finally found The Cave Wanderer’s footsteps but there two sets and they were going different ways and we didn’t know what to do so Jaken went left and I went right then he gave me a walkie talkie, saying “the other one in the hands of The Cave Wanderer”, then I realised that Jaken was not very smart. I started to ring The Cave Wanderer but he didn’t answer so I rang again but he didn’t answer so I rang again, it took about two minutes and I was just about to give up when he answered. I immediately said “are you The Cave Wanderer” and he said “yes” then I quickly said “what way did you go at the junction” then he replied without thinking “left then right then left again” so I quickly wrote it down on the walkie talkie and headed off, keeping the walkie talkie and leaving Jaken so I could find The Cave Wanderer and get home **


 * When I finally got to the little town the villagers had put together I was amased, it had everything anyone needed but all in one small space, it had a coal mine and a pile of wood and a trading center and about five big house. That moment, someone saw me and said “hey look it’s a new comer, why don’t you go pick a house and a job remember pick carefully because the house you pick is the house you stay in forever unless you choose to leave.” I knew The Cave Wanderer was in one of these houses but what one? Then I remembered the shoes, the footsteps, there was a whole pile of shoes outside the doors. I ran to the shoes and looked through all of them but I couldn’t find The Cave Wanderers. Just t that point I remembered the walkie talkie and started calling him, then in the distance I heard ringing so I turned around and there he was The Cave Wanderer. “I found you, you do not how much I’ve been through to get to you, I’ve chased some elves, stolen a walkie talkie from Lord Jaken and looked through peoples shoes all for you now can you take me home?” But he told me it wasn’t that easy, he had to go and get his map but that’s in the bad santa's workshop and that would be impossible to get. I disagreed and persuaded him to come with me. We left for Bad Santa’s workshop and on the way we got Jaken to came with us. **


 * When we finally got sight of the bad santa’s workshop we saw how much guards there were and we had to devise a plan. After waiting for a little bit we realised the guards route and headed in when they were away from the main entrance. When we got inside we hid behind a plant and saw even more guards than there were outside and again we realised the guards route. When the coast was clear, we went into the room where the map was left and hid behind a desk and saw even more guards than before but again we realised the guards route and I ran in and grabbed it and sprinted out but on the way out the bad santa saw us and shouted for his guards. Fortunately we were too fast for the guards but only The Cave Wanderer made it past a fence rising up from the ground. Jaken gave me a lift over the fence, knowing he wouldn’t make it over so I quickly gave him a walkie talkie and kept running. When I caught up to The Cave Wanderer I told him what happened and immediately he tried to call him but Jaken didn’t answer so The Cave Wanderer kept ringing him but he still didn’t answer. Eventually we gave up and we kept going until we got to the cave. The Cave Wanderer used the map to help us through the complex network of caves. Then suddenly he said “here, stop, the place WE came from is just around the corner” said The Cave Wanderer. **
 * ** “ What !” I thought, “he came from london as well!” The Cave Wanderer came from london just like me. I would never have guessed because unlike me he doesn’t have a cockney accent. I ask him “why did you stay here for the whole time even though you knew the way back? Why would you stay?”. His response was “because my brough my here where I was young and I made alot of friends and on that note I need to get some friends to help Jaken. With him be my side we will be able to make some changes around here.  ** **


 * I wonder towards the exit and thought to myself “maybe someone like can make some changes as will.” I shouted to The Cave Wanderer “hay mate”, he stop and looked back and I said “you need a hand.” **